Sentence structure is fine. It sounds similar to people that claim to have had an experience with aliens. What ever the experience is you had it convinced you. That's the problem with revelation. It is good for the person receiving it but hearsay to everyone else.
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Castles and dungeons had been built into the side of the volcano with damned souls streaming in and out, either going in to receive their punishment or coming out with gold bricks tied to their bodies with barbed wire, weighing them down to the point where they could barely move and lacerating their flesh.
For over a hundred miles, the land surrounding the volcano was overflowing with mountains of personal possessions, taken from those condemned to the Circle of Greed. Much like those found in Baltoh's old home, the artifacts stretched from across time, including objects such as Persian coins, silver jewelry, and bricks of dollar bills.
Forming a ring around the junkyard was a chain of pits, leading to the veins of molten gold beneath the land. There, the damned souls would toss their glossy weights shemalee into the fire and march back to the mountain to retrieve it in a solid form masturbaet that the process could be repeated.
Beyond the ring of fiery pits was a barrier of mountains, literally making it a circle of Hell. In this world, there were four kinds of punishments: you either carried the gold to wkman pits where they would be melted back down and flow back to the volcano while barbed wire masturbwte through your muscles like a hot knife through butter, you would labor in the volcano to make the gold bricks where the air was hot enough for flesh to melt off the bones, you were thrown down into the pits where you were boiled in molten gold with your body always regenerating, or you were in the junkyard, buried beneath the piles of trinkets or precious metals, forever feeling your bones shatter and your organs collapse as you were crushed over and over again without reprieve.
Molly and Gabriel were hiding in the junkyards, knowing that getting caught now would mean certain death if it drew the Hell Prince to them. There was little chance for survival against Mammon, Prince of Greed.
"So where do we go?" Molly asked, looking around to make sure that they weren't being watched.
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